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LLB information 323 glöps

• general:
• level: user
• personal:
• first name: Laurent
• last name: Le Brun
• cdcs:
• cdc #1: numb res by Carillon & Cyberiad [web] & Fairlight [web]

• demo Windows Lehel HB 160 by Tesco Gazdaságos Demócsapat [web]
• Nice rendering and beautiful attractors.
  I love those jumping fridges! :)
• rulezadded on the 2024-10-09 01:23:06
• demo Windows foo2 island by Archee [web]
• Brilliant and hilarious!
• rulezadded on the 2024-10-09 00:59:29
• 64k Windows Offset Overdrive by Spectrox
• Fantastic work!
  Nice oldschool vibes, with good transitions and flow. It's long, but it manages to keep a good flow and design consistency.
  
  My compo favorite!
• rulezadded on the 2024-10-07 00:10:29
• 64k Linux We have accidentally exposed your sysbox by Emo Lemons
• Made me smile.
• rulezadded on the 2024-08-21 13:53:38
• 64k Windows Equiratis rodentus by With Love
• Impressive work!
  Making a 64k intro is always a lot of work, and it's even more difficult when it's a first prod. This was ambitious, as animated stories are hard to do and require a massive amount of work. But you did a good job, so well done!
  
  Textures: they work very well. You kept them relatively simple, and that was a good decision. They give a consistent look across the demo.
  
  Modeling and rendering also look good. But the grass looks poor on close-up shots when we see the grey background. Maybe it would help to put a grass texture on the ground?
  
  Camera: this is a weak point. A lot of camera movements are not needed and don't serve the story. The camera movements should be more intentional. Keep the camera static (or slow) unless there's a reason for it. Camera editing and pacing would need more work to better help the story-telling.
  
  Music: it sounds relatively cheap. It sounds like the music data is too small (it sounds more like a 4kB intro than a 64kB intro). We usually count around 16kB for the music, and I suspect your music is much much smaller. But the main problem is that the music doesn't help the story-telling. It doesn't feel in sync with the image. It's very obvious when the rock falls: the music doesn't care and continue the main theme. Throughout the demo, it sounds like the music and the graphics were done independently. This kind of demo requires a lot of iterations to make sure the music matches well.
  
  
  I'd love to see more demos from you! I think your plan was overly ambitious: you obviously executed a lot of things very well, but this kind of animation with story-telling requires even more polish work to put it to the next level.
• rulezadded on the 2024-08-20 15:10:29
• 4k Windows Once Upon A Time In A Datacenter
• Very nice! It's always difficult to make story-based intros, and this is a pretty good attempt at it.
  
  Impressive result for a first prod!
• rulezadded on the 2024-04-22 00:13:33
• 8k Windows The Sheep and the Flower by Ctrl-Alt-Test [web] & Razor 1911 [web]
• Thanks everyone for the feedback!
  
  A making-of was just published:
  https://www.ctrl-alt-test.fr/2024/how-we-made-an-animated-movie-in-8kb/
• isokadded on the 2024-01-24 12:42:29
• 128b MS-Dos Crevice by Alcatraz [web]
• You forgot to use the other 128 bytes.
  
  Impressive!
• rulezadded on the 2023-04-13 21:31:21
• 4k procedural graphics Windows Fast & Fouriers by k2 [web]
• Nice attempt at adding motion to an executable image
• rulezadded on the 2023-04-13 21:25:58
• 4k procedural graphics Windows RiverScape by Razor 1911 [web]
• Really nice rendering, great job!
• rulezadded on the 2023-04-13 21:22:36